Tone and eye contact What I need to work on:
Pace,Internation,facial expressions and body language and volume.
11.8.11
WALT:Explain
What happens when you are asleep
*Uses simple time relationship words
*Has a good Introduction: It is is Humorous, when it says they are sharing embarrassing moments
*Has a good Summary: It tells you some information and then it summs up the story
*Punctuation: Punctuates
*Spelling. Spells most words correctly
*Language Features: hey use the right tense which is present
*Sentence Structures: They have long and short sentences
*Links Ideas to paragraphs
22.8.11 What Happens When You Are Asleep?
Firstly some people may grind their teeth, suck their thumbs, sleep walk, sleep talk, snore, and pedal their legs. It’s all very embarrassing but you don’t have to worry because it’s all part of life and every one does one or two of them. They will grow out of it.
Secondly your body slows down, your mouth stops making saliva, your heart beats slower, and your breathing slows downs.
As well as that when you sleep you can hear what is going on around you. You would be able to hear the alarm clock or, if you’re like my mother, a baby crying. If you hear anything unusual you would instantly wake up.
Finally while you are sleeping you also dream. Dreaming is when your have a long vision in your head while you are asleep. Nobody knows what their dreams mean. Some people sit with tape recorders and notebooks on their bedside tables. I don’t think our dreams mean anything. They are just there to keep us busy while we are asleep. This is what happens when we are asleep.
Main Ideas:
Paragraph 1:
Firstly some people may grind their teeth, suck their thumbs, sleep walk, sleep talk, snore, and pedal their legs
Paragraph 2:
Secondly your body slows down, your mouth stops making saliva, your heart beats slower, and your breathing slows downs.
Paragraph 3:
As well as that when you sleep you can hear what is going on around you.
Paragraph 4:
Dreaming is when your have a long vision in your head while you are asleep
Summary:
When people are asleep people grind their teeth, suck their thumbs, sleep walk, sleep talk, snore and pedal their legs. Your body also slows down, your mouth stops making Saliva, your heart beats slower and your breathing slows down. when you are asleep you can basically hear anything around you. When you are asleep you have a long vision in your hed called dreaming.
24.8.11 - WALT inferThe Tape Dispenser
To use a tape dispenser isunbelievably easy. It is awonderful andsimplemechanism that holds a roll of tape and dispense it inquantitiesof your liking.
The contraption is built up ofvariousparts that make itserviceable. Some of the main parts are thejaggedmetal razor, the plastic body of the dispenser, and theplasticaxle in the middle of the body. There is also thefoamygrip pad underneath the tape dispenser, which prevents it from sliding and scratching the surface it has been placed on. Some tape dispensers also have sand in the plastic body at the bottom to help weigh it down so it will not slide.
The dispenser is asimplegadget to use. Firstly, the end of the tape should already be stretched onto the razor teeth, so take hold of the tape and tug itgentlytowards you until it is the length that you require. Becarefulnot to pull it too hard so you end up with too much tape, and try to avoid cutting your fingers on themetalteeth. Next, pull the tape against the razor in aswift,downwards motion, hence cutting the measure of tape in a straight line. As a result, you can now cutapproximatelengths of tape for your work.
As you may or may not already know, a tape dispenser isn’t dependent on electricity or batteries, so it can work anytime, day or night. They are usedworldwidein offices, shops, schools, homes, and companies and serve themselves as areliableworking equipment. They’recheapand can be used to stick objects together, wrap a present, hold apieceof paper or an item to a surface, or even hold items down.
As the world leaps farther into the technology and science of the future,clever
effectiveequipment such as a tape dispenser willsurelystay thesimple ingenioustool it has been for many more generations. What are 5 different ways to use a tape despenser:*Tape notes to things*To fix another despenser*Tape clothes back together*Fix holes*Tape stuff to floors 25.8.11
Having Snow Ball fights: you can throw snow balls at your family and throw them around inside and accidentally throw one into your fire place and it will go OUT!!
Making Snow Men: If there is a lot of snow around you can make snow men and you can jump on them when you finish them and you can accessorise it
Sliding around in the snow: You can slide around in the snow which is really fun unless you slide on concrete or wood it can really hurt. If you slide on grass or on snow hills it can bereally FUN!!
Snow is Fun for Kids.
Snow is fun for kids. Why? Because you can have snowball fights, make snow men and you can slide around in the snow. Lots of kids and others love to play around in snow and have fun in it.
Firstly, you can have snowball fights. They are really fun to do because you can throw them at your family,friends and lots of other things. If your family or friends don’t like it don’t throw another one. You can throw them at your sibling inside, but I am sure that you will get in trouble. You can accidentally throw one into your fire place. For example: The other day when it was snowing in Palmerston North I got a snow ball and I threw it at my sister inside but she ducked so it went in the fire place and put it out. Snow is also fun because you can make snow men. A snow man is made up of three big snowballs. Once if you make one you can accessorise it with lots of things. For example you could have a carrot for the nose and buttons for the middle of it to make it look like it is wearing a shirt. You could also jump on it and make it again. You could keep doing that all day if you wanted to. The other day I made a snowman and I accessorised it and then I jumped on it and I kept doing that, it was a lot of fun. But I lost all of my accessories while doing it.
Snow is also fun because you can slide around in it. If there is snow on the concrete or on a deck don’t slide round in it. It will leave a lot of marks on your body. If you slide around on a snow hill or grass it can be a lot of fun. For example the other day I was sliding around in the snow but I was dumb because I was sliding on the concrete and I was getting marks all over my body. Then I got smart and I started to slide around on the grass.
So all together you can see snow is fun. So the next time you have snow around start having snowball fights, make snowmen and slide around in the snow. They are all so much fun. 30.8.11 WALT:
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Here is my end of term writing sample... My Learning Goal is: Plan and Use Paragraphs Hayden ShawWho is Hayden Jonathan Shaw? Well you are about to find out.He was born in Christchurch. His Birth date is the 31/8/1980 He plays defender for Canterbury and New Zealand. Hayden Shaw loves to play cricket and spend time with his daughter Johanna outside of his hockey. The thing that Hayden Shaw is really good at is drag flicking. His drag flick is the best in the world. The strongest point in his game is dribbling.
Hayden Shaw plays as a defender. He loves to play defender because he can direct things going on in front of him. The one thing that he doesn’t like doing as a back is that he has to stand on the post in defensive penalty corners, the shots he gets are very hard and he gets injured a lot in defensive penalty corners.
Hayden Shaw plays for New Zealand and Canterbury. He captains both teams. He loves being captain because he gets to do the coin toss. His teams like him being captain because he is a good leader at the back. He doesn’t like dealing with the the teams problems for example: people not wanting certain people to play, people getting injured and blaming team members and these are only some of the teams problems.
The most important thing to Hayden Shaw’s game is his dribbling. Hayden Shaw’s drag flick goes around 120km/h and it is the best in the world. He always uses it in the attacking Penalty Corners and he usually scores with it. He is the best dribbler in New Zealand, he can get around anyone with doing a left to right drag.
So as you can see from this explanation on Hayden Shaw he is one of the best hockey players in the world. You can see that he has many factors to his game that make him the best in the world here are some of them: His drag flick, his dribbling, his left to right drag around players and his leadership. Click here for a full PDF version of my writing with teacher comments...
3 October 2011: For Inquiry this term we were working on completing our independent inquiries for "The World's in Our Hands." Here are my reflections on my learning.
3 October 2011: This term in Te Reo Maori we have being learning what some basic commands are and some Maori Place Names are. Here is my Place Names and Commands...
3 October 2011
We had to make a Ad or a Commercial for a product or company. Josh and I chose Nike
Oral Language: WALT explain & present
What I think i did well:
Tone and eye contactWhat I need to work on:
Pace,Internation,facial expressions and body language and volume.
11.8.11
WALT:Explain
What happens when you are asleep
*Uses simple time relationship words
*Has a good Introduction: It is is Humorous, when it says they are sharing embarrassing moments
*Has a good Summary: It tells you some information and then it summs up the story
*Punctuation: Punctuates
*Spelling. Spells most words correctly
*Language Features: hey use the right tense which is present
*Sentence Structures: They have long and short sentences
*Links Ideas to paragraphs
22.8.11
What Happens When You Are Asleep?
Firstly some people may grind their teeth, suck their thumbs, sleep walk, sleep talk, snore, and pedal their legs. It’s all very embarrassing but you don’t have to worry because it’s all part of life and every one does one or two of them. They will grow out of it.
Secondly your body slows down, your mouth stops making saliva, your heart beats slower, and your breathing slows downs.
As well as that when you sleep you can hear what is going on around you. You would be able to hear the alarm clock or, if you’re like my mother, a baby crying. If you hear anything unusual you would instantly wake up.
Finally while you are sleeping you also dream. Dreaming is when your have a long vision in your head while you are asleep. Nobody knows what their dreams mean. Some people sit with tape recorders and notebooks on their bedside tables. I don’t think our dreams mean anything. They are just there to keep us busy while we are asleep. This is what happens when we are asleep.
Main Ideas:
Paragraph 1:
Firstly some people may grind their teeth, suck their thumbs, sleep walk, sleep talk, snore, and pedal their legs
Paragraph 2:
Secondly your body slows down, your mouth stops making saliva, your heart beats slower, and your breathing slows downs.
Paragraph 3:
As well as that when you sleep you can hear what is going on around you.
Paragraph 4:
Dreaming is when your have a long vision in your head while you are asleep
Summary:
When people are asleep people grind their teeth, suck their thumbs, sleep walk, sleep talk, snore and pedal their legs. Your body also slows down, your mouth stops making Saliva, your heart beats slower and your breathing slows down. when you are asleep you can basically hear anything around you. When you are asleep you have a long vision in your hed called dreaming.
24.8.11 - WALT inferThe Tape Dispenser
To use a tape dispenser isunbelievably easy. It is awonderful andsimplemechanism that holds a roll of tape and dispense it inquantitiesof your liking.
The contraption is built up ofvariousparts that make itserviceable. Some of the main parts are thejaggedmetal razor, the plastic body of the dispenser, and theplasticaxle in the middle of the body. There is also thefoamygrip pad underneath the tape dispenser, which prevents it from sliding and scratching the surface it has been placed on. Some tape dispensers also have sand in the plastic body at the bottom to help weigh it down so it will not slide.
The dispenser is asimplegadget to use. Firstly, the end of the tape should already be stretched onto the razor teeth, so take hold of the tape and tug itgentlytowards you until it is the length that you require. Becarefulnot to pull it too hard so you end up with too much tape, and try to avoid cutting your fingers on themetalteeth. Next, pull the tape against the razor in aswift,downwards motion, hence cutting the measure of tape in a straight line. As a result, you can now cutapproximatelengths of tape for your work.
As you may or may not already know, a tape dispenser isn’t dependent on electricity or batteries, so it can work anytime, day or night. They are usedworldwidein offices, shops, schools, homes, and companies and serve themselves as areliableworking equipment. They’recheapand can be used to stick objects together, wrap a present, hold apieceof paper or an item to a surface, or even hold items down.
As the world leaps farther into the technology and science of the future,clever
effectiveequipment such as a tape dispenser willsurelystay thesimple ingenioustool it has been for many more generations.
What are 5 different ways to use a tape despenser:*Tape notes to things*To fix another despenser*Tape clothes back together*Fix holes*Tape stuff to floors
25.8.11
Topic: Snow is fun for kids
Main Ideas:
Snow is Fun for Kids.
Snow is fun for kids. Why? Because you can have snowball fights, make snow men and you can slide around in the snow. Lots of kids and others love to play around in snow and have fun in it.
Firstly, you can have snowball fights. They are really fun to do because you can throw them at your family,friends and lots of other things. If your family or friends don’t like it don’t throw another one. You can throw them at your sibling inside, but I am sure that you will get in trouble. You can accidentally throw one into your fire place. For example: The other day when it was snowing in Palmerston North I got a snow ball and I threw it at my sister inside but she ducked so it went in the fire place and put it out.
Snow is also fun because you can make snow men. A snow man is made up of three big snowballs. Once if you make one you can accessorise it with lots of things. For example you could have a carrot for the nose and buttons for the middle of it to make it look like it is wearing a shirt. You could also jump on it and make it again. You could keep doing that all day if you wanted to. The other day I made a snowman and I accessorised it and then I jumped on it and I kept doing that, it was a lot of fun. But I lost all of my accessories while doing it.
Snow is also fun because you can slide around in it. If there is snow on the concrete or on a deck don’t slide round in it. It will leave a lot of marks on your body. If you slide around on a snow hill or grass it can be a lot of fun. For example the other day I was sliding around in the snow but I was dumb because I was sliding on the concrete and I was getting marks all over my body. Then I got smart and I started to slide around on the grass.
So all together you can see snow is fun. So the next time you have snow around start having snowball fights, make snowmen and slide around in the snow. They are all so much fun.
30.8.11
WALT:
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Infer
31 August 2011: Goal Setting & Reflections 2011...
23 September 2011: Literacy - WritingWALT explain
Here is our success criteria...
Here is my end of term writing sample...
My Learning Goal is: Plan and Use Paragraphs
Hayden ShawWho is Hayden Jonathan Shaw? Well you are about to find out.He was born in Christchurch. His Birth date is the 31/8/1980 He plays defender for Canterbury and New Zealand. Hayden Shaw loves to play cricket and spend time with his daughter Johanna outside of his hockey. The thing that Hayden Shaw is really good at is drag flicking. His drag flick is the best in the world. The strongest point in his game is dribbling.
Hayden Shaw plays as a defender. He loves to play defender because he can direct things going on in front of him. The one thing that he doesn’t like doing as a back is that he has to stand on the post in defensive penalty corners, the shots he gets are very hard and he gets injured a lot in defensive penalty corners.
Hayden Shaw plays for New Zealand and Canterbury. He captains both teams. He loves being captain because he gets to do the coin toss. His teams like him being captain because he is a good leader at the back. He doesn’t like dealing with the the teams problems for example: people not wanting certain people to play, people getting injured and blaming team members and these are only some of the teams problems.
The most important thing to Hayden Shaw’s game is his dribbling. Hayden Shaw’s drag flick goes around 120km/h and it is the best in the world. He always uses it in the attacking Penalty Corners and he usually scores with it. He is the best dribbler in New Zealand, he can get around anyone with doing a left to right drag.
So as you can see from this explanation on Hayden Shaw he is one of the best hockey players in the world. You can see that he has many factors to his game that make him the best in the world here are some of them: His drag flick, his dribbling, his left to right drag around players and his leadership.
Click here for a full PDF version of my writing with teacher comments...
Here is a summary of my writing progress this term...
Click here for my full writing progress indicator matrix...
3 October 2011: For Inquiry this term we were working on completing our independent inquiries for "The World's in Our Hands." Here are my reflections on my learning.
You can all see my completed movie at: http://wsroom152011-2.wikispaces.com/The+World%27s+in+our+Hands
3 October 2011: This term in Te Reo Maori we have being learning what some basic commands are and some Maori Place Names are. Here is my Place Names and Commands...
3 October 2011
We had to make a Ad or a Commercial for a product or company. Josh and I chose Nike